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critique post.

HOW'S MY DRIVING?
If you have any comments/suggestions for how I play Pip, please use this post to address all of them with me. Constructive criticism is really appreciated, so if you have any tips or ideas to help better my Pip, I'd be really grateful! Not everybody's perfect and I'd like to see what I could do better with and what I'm already doing well at. Asking for honest critique here, so if you think my Pip sucks, it would really help if you told me why you feel that way so I know what I should work on.

A note: If you have any tips about how his accent should be played with, I would love to hear them. I'm still trying to tinker around with things that feel "right" without being over-the-top and hard to understand, so input would definitely be loved.


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darwins_theory

February 6 2009, 12:29:33 UTC 8 years ago Edited:  February 6 2009, 12:31:00 UTC

Jas. says:
did you see
Jas. says:
the scooby doo thing
Jas. says:
rizu did
(tu) Jake Judgement // Pi Face (tu) says:
HAHA YESSS
Jas. says:
OH OKAY AHAH
(tu) Jake Judgement // Pi Face (tu) says:
I LOLD
(tu) Jake Judgement // Pi Face (tu) says:
so
(tu) Jake Judgement // Pi Face (tu) says:
bad
(tu) Jake Judgement // Pi Face (tu) says:
):
Jas. says:
me too ):
Jas. says:
i love
Jas. says:
spooky
Jas. says:
who is pip
Jas. says:
i love
Jas. says:
her pip
(tu) Jake Judgement // Pi Face (tu) says:
I KNOW
(tu) Jake Judgement // Pi Face (tu) says:
so do i
Jas. says:
even though idk cannon ):
(tu) Jake Judgement // Pi Face (tu) says:
well
(tu) Jake Judgement // Pi Face (tu) says:
i do
(tu) Jake Judgement // Pi Face (tu) says:
and its like
Jas. says:
HES JUST FUNNNN
(tu) Jake Judgement // Pi Face (tu) says:
perfect
(tu) Jake Judgement // Pi Face (tu) says:
):

( Jas is moi, and Jake is Sho's RPer. )

CONSTRUCTIVE?
OKAY WELL Maybe not, but I just wanted you to know that someone thinks you're doing something right.

:DD
fshkljlls *omgflattered* D; I'm really glad I haven't messed up anything too badly with him just yet and that a few people seem to think he's fun already. ♥ This really cheered me up, thank you very much for letting me know!
YOU'RE WELCOME!

He is really fun! Like you know how sometimes when you're interacting with a character you find it hard for inspiration to reply back with? Well I didn't have that problem at all with Pip. As stated, I don't know cannon, but you make it really easy to reply to him because he is a really interesting character. The way he just rambles on and constantly expresses himself entertains me to no end. <3

Just so you know what I love about him. <3
Because I read somewhere (maybe the ooc comm?) that you said you were worried about playing him right because it's your first time playing him? So though I can't tell you anything about how well you're portraying him, but I can tell you how well you are doing... RP wise in general? <3

BUT JAKE SAYS that if read volume 6 and 7 that I would know in what ways you are perfect, but sadly I have not. ): BUT HE SAYS 7 is his favorite volume, so that might make it extra flattering? Oh and he's like a big hellsing fan. 8D;;

OKAY SO THIS HAS NO CRIT, but you haven't been playing him for very long so I don't know what to say is wrong because I honestly loved having that conversation with him. ;__;

AND I'M GLAD YOU'RE NOT LIKE CUTTING ME OR ANYTHING. I was worried you'd be like 'FUCK THIS HAS NO CRIT BITCH I HATE YOU OK.'

UM.
yes.
<3
D: That makes me very happy, thank you! ♥ And Pip liked talking to Lucy, even if he was pretty sure he was going to pee his pants at first. XD

Yeah, this is my first time with him outside of just joking around in an instant message with somebody. Usually I make him overly ridiculous when he rants about things. XD And even if you don't know the canon, it really helps knowing what you do like seeing just about how I play in general. I'm glad he's interesting. :D

There are a few Hellsing fans here and I was nervous about that too, so it makes me very happy that he approves. I actually poked around the manga and Hellsing Ultimate a whole bunch before I got to work on my writing samples so that I could try and get his voice right.


IT'S OKAY! I like knowing what people like seeing more of too, so I'll try to keep having Pip continue the way he has been. P:


♥♥♥
I SECOND EVERYTHING NEON SAID.

<3
FKJSLJHSLJKL ♥ Your Sho is so fantastic. D: He makes my heart gleeful.
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